For My writing I did a Persuasive writing and I did to not litter because you can hurt the sea animals And they can die cause they can be blown away from the wind so if you see rubbish pick it up and put it in the bin.
Monday, September 6, 2021
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Hi George,
ReplyDeleteWe certainly need to look after the animals of our planet, and not littering would be a big help of course. I would have liked to see you expand and back up your statements a bit further. Also make sure you read your sentences to make sure they make sense. See you back at school very soon. You will be looking forward to catching up with your friends too.